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 User profile
 <p>
 When you are logged in, you can find a <a href='$AC_URL$profile'>profile</a> link.
-You can set various information about your account.
+You can set various information about your account there:
 <ul>
-       <li><strong>Email</strong> ‒ this is the address email notifications about changes in database will be sent.
-       It is used for resetting password and you can log in using it.
+       <li><strong>Email</strong> ‒ this is the address to which email notifications about changes in the database will be sent.
+       It is also used for logging in or for resetting your password.
        <li><strong>Login</strong> ‒ you can log in using this one instead of your email address.
-       Furthermore, it is showed with discussion comments you wrote.
+       Furthermore, it is displayed along all discussion comments you wrote.
        <li><strong>Xmpp</strong> ‒ you can get notifications using xmpp (aka jabber) as well as email.
-       <li><strong>Password</strong> ‒ if you want to set new password, fill in both new password and confirm password boxes.
-       <li><strong>Batch times</strong> ‒ if you want to group notifications together, so you receive less messages.
-       This is the time in minutes, for how long the system will gather notifications before it sends them by email or xmpp respectively.
+       <li><strong>Password</strong> ‒ if you want to set a new password, fill in both the new password and confirm password boxes.
+       <li><strong>Batch times</strong> ‒ you can ask for having your notifications grouped together, so that you receive less messages.
+       Enter a time in minutes.
 </ul>
 
 <h2>Password protected values</h2>
 <p>
-Email, login and new password are protected by the old password.
+Email, login and the new password are protected by the old password.
 If you want to change any of these, you must provide the old password to unlock them.
 
 <h2>See also</h2>
 <p>
-You can get a profile by <a href='$HELP_URL$account'>registering it</a>.
+You can get a profile by <a href='$HELP_URL$account'>registering an account</a>.
 <p>
 To receive any notifications, you need to <a href='$HELP_URL$notifications'>set them up</a>.